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DaVince

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Starts out ok, then turns to rampage.

It starts out good. But then it repeats WAY too much, which makes it boring.
After a while, you start adding more instruments, but at tone height which make the whole song sound dissonant, and actually annoying.

You're starting to learn, though. The melody is better than what you used to do. 4 for you.

Astrono responds:

Yes, i 'm now making songs with more different melody's.
Thanks for the review.;)

Bad and short music, sorry to say.

You really need to do something about your sense of timing, and your choice of instruments. And the melody consists of only a few notes close to each other, and a whole lot of repetitiveness.

Sure, you were bored. You can still use effort to make something when you're bored, though.

silverplated3 responds:

iight no mo o dis shit.

Good.

I normally take the time to review something, but I'm kinda tired. This is pretty good, I enjoyed it, and continue making good music and improving yourself. Worth a 9.

SolusLunes responds:

Well, hey, it's the thought that counts, right? Glad to see you like it, and you're not one of those "OMGZEZ 10Z ACROSS TEH BOARD" monkeys. :D

Hit on the head?

This vaguely reminds me of Earthbound. The big difference, however, is that EB had weirdness blended in actual music, and this is weirdness only. I also can't imagine where to use something like this. I guess when someone gets hit on the head? lol.

I don't dislike it, so here's a 6 for you.

Pretty good.

Well, this song is pretty good. It's very polished and the instrument choice is pretty good though.

A few downers... The main melody is pretty repetitive, and likes to stick around the same keys a lot. Try to avoid that by having more variation in it. I'm talking the organs here.

woohoono1 responds:

Always up for a tip DaVince. I'll change the organ and give it some more variation

Great ambience.

I pretty much agree with ABITA. This is something that would fit for ambient game or animation music.

It's still pretty good, though, and if I were making a game and couldn't make music of my own I'd probably use this if I stumbled across it.

Oh, come on!

You were right about the title, I gotta admit that. This is NOT music. It's more like an ear-pain.

Tell me. Why did you make this? And what decided you to release it? It's basically nothing but some stupid noise!

Okay tune, but...

Okay, I'll review this one.

The tune is pretty good, but there is absolutely nothing that supports it. I'd expect something like drums to appear, and strings, and a bass line. But none of these come up which makes it kinda boring to listen to.

There's one note in the background that stays the same for about half the song. It's annoying.

Also, the song has nohing to do with a church, just not how it sounds. You'd expect an organ, not something mechanical for a church. Also church music is quite different anyway. ;)

I didn't dislike it, but you could have done better. The tune is there, now add some reall support to the song!

Astrono responds:

Thank you very much!
I try to do that for my next song

It's ok, but...

This song is ok, but it loops a bit too much, plus the measures get cut off too soon, which is pretty annoying.

The tune itself is good though. Original melody with some diversity in it. If only that lasted...

Pretty good, though a tad looping.

Well, this song is pretty good, but it has a few downers. For example, it loops a lot without too much diversity (except for the piano part that comes in, but that starts looping too much too).

Then there's the fact that there's a tiny bit of time missing between measures. Guess that's my fine hearing. :P

A 7 because I enjoyed this a bit.

Lovin' da music.

Vincent Beers @DaVince

Age 35, Male

Amsterdam, Netherlands

Joined on 1/6/06

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