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Nice ambience.

More ambience than actual music. This would work great in a game, maybe an underwater level of an FPS, or something like that.

There's generally not a lot going on, though. You might want to try and make some more filled up music next time.

Astrono responds:

Thanks for the great advice :D
I will see if i try that for my next song, probably yes.

Pretty good. Gameish.

Hmmm... You know, this makes for a great selection screen in games, or stuff like that. Pretty backgroundish, good tune, and an overall relaxed theme.

I think adding and holding a few simple synth chords to the song after a while would work well.

Astrono responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)
Some simple synth chords.... interesting idea!

Starts out ok, then turns to rampage.

It starts out good. But then it repeats WAY too much, which makes it boring.
After a while, you start adding more instruments, but at tone height which make the whole song sound dissonant, and actually annoying.

You're starting to learn, though. The melody is better than what you used to do. 4 for you.

Astrono responds:

Yes, i 'm now making songs with more different melody's.
Thanks for the review.;)

Bad and short music, sorry to say.

You really need to do something about your sense of timing, and your choice of instruments. And the melody consists of only a few notes close to each other, and a whole lot of repetitiveness.

Sure, you were bored. You can still use effort to make something when you're bored, though.

silverplated3 responds:

iight no mo o dis shit.

Good.

I normally take the time to review something, but I'm kinda tired. This is pretty good, I enjoyed it, and continue making good music and improving yourself. Worth a 9.

SolusLunes responds:

Well, hey, it's the thought that counts, right? Glad to see you like it, and you're not one of those "OMGZEZ 10Z ACROSS TEH BOARD" monkeys. :D

Pretty good.

Well, this song is pretty good. It's very polished and the instrument choice is pretty good though.

A few downers... The main melody is pretty repetitive, and likes to stick around the same keys a lot. Try to avoid that by having more variation in it. I'm talking the organs here.

woohoono1 responds:

Always up for a tip DaVince. I'll change the organ and give it some more variation

Okay tune, but...

Okay, I'll review this one.

The tune is pretty good, but there is absolutely nothing that supports it. I'd expect something like drums to appear, and strings, and a bass line. But none of these come up which makes it kinda boring to listen to.

There's one note in the background that stays the same for about half the song. It's annoying.

Also, the song has nohing to do with a church, just not how it sounds. You'd expect an organ, not something mechanical for a church. Also church music is quite different anyway. ;)

I didn't dislike it, but you could have done better. The tune is there, now add some reall support to the song!

Astrono responds:

Thank you very much!
I try to do that for my next song

Bit false, but the notes are right.

Well, the instruments are a bit off-tone, but the total doesn't sound bad at all. You could have fine-tuned the instruments though... XD

Bad-Atom responds:

All the instruments and synths I chose were fine-tuned exactly the way I wanted them. I don't think they're off-tone or out of tune at all.

FIts the environment.

Well, this song really has some tension, like you're in a basement or cave in a game with monsters and stuff. It would fit the environment it's meant for very well.

The beat has diversity, and I like that. It's not continually the same, but something that changes.

There's a few downers though, and that would be that it's drums and percussion ONLY, which can become a bit boring, especially because there's some kind of tension. Also, some of the instruments sound like they are played slowly, where you'd probably be better off using low-played instruments played normally there.

A 7 is just fine.

BrothaGaget responds:

thanks for your input man

Lovin' da music.

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