Okay tune, but...
Okay, I'll review this one.
The tune is pretty good, but there is absolutely nothing that supports it. I'd expect something like drums to appear, and strings, and a bass line. But none of these come up which makes it kinda boring to listen to.
There's one note in the background that stays the same for about half the song. It's annoying.
Also, the song has nohing to do with a church, just not how it sounds. You'd expect an organ, not something mechanical for a church. Also church music is quite different anyway. ;)
I didn't dislike it, but you could have done better. The tune is there, now add some reall support to the song!